Eighth Post!
Jun. 25th, 2023 03:12 pmIt's one thing if mankind is hunted to extinction by ChatGPT, but I really do object to being executed by Bing.
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Re: Poetry - Believe in the Future (相信未来) by Shi Zhi (食指)
Date: 2023-07-09 06:36 am (UTC)I had a lot of trouble with this poem because some of these lines don't make grammatical sense, and there's been a couple of different versions of this poem over the ages that attempt to 'correct' this. For example, here's a couple versions of this line:
It also seems like there's been some vocabulary changes over time. For example, another version of the poem I found had 'deep autumn tears' instead of 'deep autumn dew' and then made the withered vine 'dew-encrusted' instead of 'frozen.' Not sure what's up with that, either.
I was supposed to post this poem yesterday, but I passed out instead. Tomorrow will be the last poem, and hopefully you guys will find it fun!
Re: Poetry - Believe in the Future (相信未来) by Shi Zhi (食指)
Date: 2023-07-09 08:58 am (UTC)Hope you're alright, nonny!
Re: Poetry - Believe in the Future (相信未来) by Shi Zhi (食指)
Date: 2023-07-09 05:04 pm (UTC)